tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7626552327762247629.post8675382501844998376..comments2023-10-02T05:17:57.745-04:00Comments on Fragrant Elephant: Ang Bruha ng Balete / The Witch of BaleteFragrant Elephanthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02622569777207864974noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7626552327762247629.post-14025734969692848912013-04-18T10:51:37.639-04:002013-04-18T10:51:37.639-04:00Yup, this was part of a larger story that was deem...Yup, this was part of a larger story that was deemed "too convoluted" by another reader. So I just cut out this section. Still thinking what to do with it.Fragrant Elephanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02622569777207864974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7626552327762247629.post-40650125362021234662013-04-14T11:53:21.081-04:002013-04-14T11:53:21.081-04:00Other questions: Where's the conflict? What ha...Other questions: Where's the conflict? What happens to the witch? Is there a reason she waits? How does this tie to the modern day?<br /><br />Still fascinating though :) Good luck with this.JM Ibanezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15233626920890324907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7626552327762247629.post-90355718201918408832013-04-14T11:41:24.877-04:002013-04-14T11:41:24.877-04:00Kulang. It seems to be all setup, no payoff. Reads...Kulang. It seems to be all setup, no payoff. Reads like a fairy tale (which I like), but, like I said, is missing the climax and resolution.<br />JM Ibanezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15233626920890324907noreply@blogger.com